I Am The Light
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IP:
Deep thoughts man...lots of meaning...i feel that the structure of the peace was weak...but you expressed yourself well....maybe work on your word play and structure and you'll have a promising writing hoby..
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SOFT FOCUS crew record (3-0) Wits end ~ DOI ~ Central....now who's next?
sacred scriptures record (5-0)
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