but um yeah i was diggin it...

tho you sound kinda congested...iono bout this ish here.....

tha beat is wack tho.......

you need more emotion.......

dont read while you recordin cause you sound like you didnt memorize ya verse at all...


other than that...werk on ya vocal presence you gotta have some command in ya voice like yeah im a cocky muh fuckah......ya know