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Old 11-28-03, 12:24 AM   #20
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From: E-Dub
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lmao tag took this without a doubt...pine-cone man I expected more from u...u voted on my battle n acted like u was ill n shit..so that p.o.s that u posted dissapointed me really....ur entire verse was fucking simple..not only that but u went back to like 1920 (when hiphop was really invented ya'll LOL) and just put a damn word at the end of ur line to make it rhyme with the other line...

"leaving you wondering weather to neg//
taking it from a guy named bubba, FAG..."

^ that is the worst 2 lines I have ever seen...first of all..what the fuck does 'neg' mean?? lmao....2nd you fucking threw the word FAG in there just so u'd have something to rhyme....and u even fucked up the flow when u did it....ur whole verse was like that man...u seriously need work...this looks like something I wrote in 6th grade (I'm dead fucking serious too, i'm not exagerating)

Tag you were kinda weak too..but I see what u went against....lmao @ calling him snowcone tho...that's corny as hell but I laughed...and I'm NOT in a good mood right now....so u get points for that..the rest of your verse was really basic tho but let's say u were rapping on a balance (like one of those seesaw looking balances...)

-1= WHAT THE FUCK?
0= just basic
+1= good...

Tag stayed in the 0 area...while pine-cone went into the WHAT THE FUCK?? zone lol....

ok n I'll use his gay voting system too..

intro-tag
punches-tag
metas-tag
structure-pine-cone (atleast his LOOKED pretty)
personals-tag
finisher-tag

blowout battle...

vote=TAG
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