yo, i thought this was a cool drop... there was a line that i thought was cool as shyt....

My words aint spoken as you would think, they're rehearsed till everythings in sync
Every syllable is a link to something so distinct you'll miss it if you blink

that's hot as hell, duke!... the flow was pretty good... i started to feel it a little more as i got into it... but like the others said, shorten it up a bit.... it is a long read but it kept my interest til the end...

it's nice to see that there are still some real emcees out there besides the gang-bangers and thugs... keep that REAL hip-hop coming!