I haven't read many with such short lines but the ones I do read seem to be really good. These types seem more poetic to me. So much said in so few words. By reading this, looks like you have a talent for it.

When I read it, I got the feeling you just sat down and wrote something out real quick. Something that got to bothering you and you wanted to vent. Might not be how it happened but whatever. I feel the same way but only the opposite. People see you as a gangster? People see me as being really innocent. I got one of those faces, you know? Annoying as hell but I got out of a few speeding tickets with it so I can't complain

Anyways, Nice writing. Keep on posting your stuff up here.