Erstaunlicher es wäre, wenn Sie fließend auf deutsch waren. Ich wünsche, daß ich war.

Ahem... um... yeah.

I don't know about the emotio. I think those replys were scheiße and that I'd expected better.

A serious reply would've gone along the lines of: I was drawn into this witht he opening verse. It didn't really catch my eye as it sounded like every other poem I've read. And in fact, I admittivly only half-assed read it through until I got to the last line.

And that's when you came along with that twist ending. And something like that, well I had to re-read it with some serious intent.

And I was more than astonished. I was impressed. Especially with that rose colored glassess line. And the seeming metaphore about the demons.

Well... that's how a serious reply would go. But I'm not going to do a serious reply. I'm just going to say...

...wow. awesome peice. really feelin' it...

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.