This was a nice piece. Your word play was nice, and the length of the lines fit the topic and flow of the piece very well. It made me think how many people, mostly all people, judge by what they see on the outside. I think the last line gave the piece the most power. I didnt take it as you just repeating the first line in the piece, but as you wanting to see what a person see's after you just expressed the steriotyping and labeling they do before getting to know you...wanting to know what they have to think now that you made all their assumptions invalid. This was a nice read. Keep it up.

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."