Nice, I liked this.
When i first read it, i was thinking about a relationship, where youre doing the person wrong intentionally. But then my whole thoughts flipped. I started thinking about the corruption of society, and how there arent many TRUE people out there. I saw you realixing the pain that you was causing ut no caring, just using this person as a step stool to help you get higher.
But i also saw it as a person that's very dependant on you, and very clingy, expecting you to take care of everything, and that path making them weaker, causing them to sink lower, and you just watch it and it doesnt affect you b/c you didnt like being the supporter, and having all the responsibilities on your plate, and they realize, but it's to late........
now that i htink about it, i can interpert this like 20 more different ways, but fortunately i'm not, lol, but this was a real nice piece, it made me think, and not many pieces do that. I enjoyed it.
keep it up

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."