I really liked this piece. It was simple but the whole way you went about it showed some true talent.
[qoute]When Fuck crept into verse and slipped into print,.......

But no longer forbidden, Fuck's lost all respect.
It's become little more than a useless old wreck.
What's even worse, when itsd meaning was robbed
By that wimpy "make love" Fuck whimpered and sobbed.[/quote]

^i like those pieces right there. The word play for me was on point. I think it's funny how a once so harsh word, seemed to have no affect on people now. I like how you brought that into view, and branched away from the typical topics. This was a nice read. Keep writin

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."