lol @ Necromancer
but i do agree, i dont think there was much emotion, just meaning and strength behind the words
i read it full out the first time, but the ending line did make me apreciate the piece even more, so i read it again
your talent was really expressed by this piece
it was a nice read
i felt it
keep writin
keep elevatin

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."