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Old 11-28-03, 12:12 PM   #2
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I really liked this piece
Quote:
i see no expression in beauty
only how it hurts those that it hasn't found

especially this line,
the length, vocab, and word play fit this piece perfectly
no complaints
keep writin
keep elevatin
i'll keep readin
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Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding
Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."
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