I truley liked this piece. I agree how it's good to see someone finding the Lord, nothings better than that if you ask me.
As for the poem, I also like the story format, it gave the reader a front row seat in the situations you were experiencing. This was a real nice piece. Inspiring.
I felt it, keep writin

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."