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Old 11-28-03, 12:27 PM   #11
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I'm lovin this piece right now. Each line drew me deeper and deeper in. I can relate to this so well, you dont even know...but not with the Devil's Daughter,more so like Son, dont get it twisted .....
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Constantly wondering how love can hurt and fufill like this...

i often wondered that, this reads just like something i would've wrote.... much respect for this piece, for the vocab, word usage/play, flow, structure, being just right, and for picking a topic I can so closely relate
keep writin
keep elevatin
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