Thanks for the feedback
I purposely made this piece short
I didnt want to over do it with details
and bore the reader, i was mainly trying
to portray my message using imagery
and personificatin......i havent wrote the
meaning behind it yet
but......yea
uppin

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."