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Old 11-28-03, 07:15 PM   #3
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This was really good... Very creative.. original..
It made me laugh a little as I remember an old friend of mine who would never curse.. and we spent weeks trying to get her to say just one word... and Fuck was the funniest. 'You dont just say fuck... you gotta put emphasis into it, and show the emotion when you do!' lol Gawd... had to be there heh
Back to the piece... while in my head these thoughts arent so original, but to be written into poetry like this, was just great to see.. and you did it well... some of the lines were just genius..

Dictionaries ignored it for quite a long while,
As Fuck flexed its muscles and grew potent and vile.

Great write Twizzle.
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