yo...i ain't gonna lie.

ur flow needs a lot of work. it'll get better after ya voice cracks. HAHA...ur friend makes u look a lot better.

also, the lyrcis r garbage. no offense, but they r. go to front lines n start batlin. 20-30 battles n u'll be 10x the lyrisist u r now.

finally, the beat was coo until i realised it wasn't goin to bust out. u don't have the skill to carry a track like that yet. better off practicin wit bangers n try find out how to bring heat.

don't stress thou, ur young, so u got lots ofg time to improve ya game...just put the time in. pc

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