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Old 11-29-03, 12:18 AM   #14
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hmm pretty decent battle...

HD had a decent verse...rhymescheme was nice but u had no multis....and u had a few good punchlines..nothing amazing though....and the fact that u fucked up and posted halfway into ur verse made it more annoying to read lol....

Idle had a nicer lookin verse for one..(no points on that tho lol) u used that played "fuck up" line....the too raw to fuck line was tite...the lost your touch line was played tho...maybe not played but I seen it before once...the rest of ur verse was pretty weak but good enough to win...

vote-Idle
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