Yea, Your back dawg, good to see it.

Your vocab here was tight, but you went over the top a bit, this would be extremely difficult if you were using this for audio, but for a text piece this shit goes way beyond dope..l0l

You had good structure, however the hook was off flow..it just lacked something, but the rest flowed smoothly like silk, first verse i felt was superior..but they both were dope...

4/5 - dope.... what was the comment towards me all about..lol?