Deva you came with nice structure, but structure don't mean shit in audio, I can happily say I appreciate the new style I write in, because even liens do get too repetitive unless you use multis and inner, i didn't see any of them, but the meaning was good,

gene.. Your flow was very nice, i was feeling your lines, vocab let this down quite alot, i mean the rhymes were a bit basic, with no multis but the depth was def there. .Pz