Shows how muh you know man .. k look at it this way ... imagine if my song was like

the sky is blue//
so are you//
do do do//

thats how i rapped when i first started..lol..mmaybe not that whack but still... and yes im new at recording..but ur wrong about the " a dozen verses written " ive been writtin for 4 years..and i know my audio needs improving..but u say my lyrics are garbage man?? k .. u make it sound like any old loser cold write my stuff..i put lots of effort into it..theres LOTS of good metaphors and punchlines and ryhmes schemes if u were paying attention.... like come on give me a break