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Originally posted by RythmicTendicies
Yea, Your back dawg, good to see it.
Your vocab here was tight, but you went over the top a bit, this would be extremely difficult if you were using this for audio, but for a text piece this shit goes way beyond dope..l0l
You had good structure, however the hook was off flow..it just lacked something, but the rest flowed smoothly like silk, first verse i felt was superior..but they both were dope...
4/5 - dope.... what was the comment towards me all about..lol?
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Thanks Fam....I really appreciated your feedback...And that comment towards you was nuthin dawg...I just looked at ur name and realized that I could have made a line using it..So I did it....One love fam |