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Old 11-29-03, 04:52 PM   #5
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This was alright.....structure needs a little work but other than that its pretty good, But try making your lines the same length so it helps that out....Try adding some multies to help the flow out though, it was a little off at some points....But overall this was alright...keep at it.
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