yo i cant vote on this coz nok'd is ma boy but at least i can give feedback...
Nok'd-very nice flow..some punches hit real nice n ya a lot betta w/ ya structure the way it is now...overall-8/10

Strict-Once again you had a good flow..but ya punches never really did any damage..every line in text has to hit really..which means no room for set ups..overall-6.5/10

Props to both pz