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Old 11-29-03, 08:46 PM   #12
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one of the best battles I've seen in the front lines lately...still wasn't tht great tho..

Tobias had a decent verse...I give him much props on actually noticing that the dudes name is mispelled..that's pretty shitty to have a mispelled name...lol..the rest of ur verse was just average tho..after ur opening it all went downhill...not too bad tho...(lmao except u talk about how he mispelled that word when u mispelled the word "CLOCK" lol)

unparalled..u came pretty hard..I don't like ur structure tho, it looks fancy n all but it's difficult to read when it's all chopped up liek that..just write ur ish in a plain style....ur rhymes were alot more complex and u had a few nice punches too....

unparalled took this one..


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95010
^ someone vote on that

peace
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