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this is not finished yet . . but i still want feedback . . i want to know how i'm doing so far . . and it hasn't been titled yet so... . . if yall can . . try reading my piece and drop down ideas on what i should title it . . aright? it'll be appreciated . . get at me!
it seemed like we never saw through each other's eye/
the many lies i told you, still you never carried any dispise//
the many times we argued about the stupidest littlest things/
behind your mood swings, were all of your deep teachings//
just because i said i hate you at times, but it doesn't mean that i meant it/
committed to make me into somebody, but i never said i wanted to be the culprit//
why don't you ever appreciate what i want to be? why can't you just let me be me?
why do you see my future to be how you plan yours, sorry i can't agree//
you're not trying to break my dreams, you're just trying to do what's best/
all for your suggestion and i understand, but i have to go with what my chest saids//
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