both were great injoyable peices

Baren was love to his granmother i felt the love you expressed and feelings were in my opinin realy drawn out good stuff...

Deacon i injoyed your peice more there for its my vote, this because the words used well the way i read it jus sounded right
the rhythm the verses...well to tell you the trueth i can't really explain it but...lol...lets jus say it was more of a complete picture


Gongrates to both peices


one has to win my vote there for it goes to

DEACON

peace