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Dragon
ok look im battlin this fool and im spittin lyrical hell//
im the unleashed dragon busted out the shell//
(Aight opener, mostly filler there)
im here to spit at you pure fire//
your a piece of shit just like firestone tires//
(Ehh kinda weak)
you cant touch me what the hell kinda name is meters//
is that short for your dick is 2 cenitmenters?//
(Good personal, punch is a lil weak though)
thats gonna be the only personal in this rhyme//
spittin these lyrics is just wastin my tyme//
(And mine, man, ya should be punching not just filling)
yo retard redrum is MURDER backwerdz Nigga//
when i spit its like a tsunami hitchu ima wigga//
im a storm of words you cant pronounce//
when this battles over like a ball im gunna bounce//
your gettin ripped so hard you aint gonna tell//
i didnt shoot u wit da cun i killed u wit da shell//
wheres the fun at when i pull back one.., shit fuck it this battle is DONE//
(^^All that shit is filler, and a weak closer to boot.)
Meters
The dragons flair unleashes a fit of terror/
Sisqo's back without platinum hair: and even gay'er/
(Nice opener)
Sear your lopped off limbs with lyrical hymns/
So your (h)armless before this merking begins/
(Aight, not bad)
My bullets roar like Ethiopians at a grocery store/
While yours pour down your cheeks like your face is the seashore/
(1st line funny, 2nd one maybe its cuz im hungover but i dont get it....)
Wanna get you outta my hair so I don a black tie/
And rely on you to make like a wig and dye/
(Nah)
Tough guy, you need to elevate like your soft dick/
‘This is as good as it gets’ says the measuring stick/
(Funny shit)
To get punched you're quick, i'm quick to the punch/
I bet dragon, sheep is the only wool you munch/
(Nice, I liked the 1st line, decent)
Your record now reduced to 0-1, still should be 0-0/
your rhymes carried so little weight, it's like you weren't even here yo
(Good closer)
No contest, Meters sonned you like your momma was begging for it. Ya gotta throw punches man, not just fill it all up with shit. I was falling asleep thru like half ya damn verse.
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ANGRY~CRACKA
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