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Old 11-30-03, 04:49 AM   #9
Angry~Cracka
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TAG

They call ya Boy Wonder cause my skills ya be "Robin"
Wearin tight ass spandex that leaves gay men sobbin
(Good opener, good personal shit, funny too)

Jay-Z as your Avitar, man you should follow his lead
Stop right now, pause to regret battlin me and leave
(Decent)

Like a mousetrap I'm just waitin ta snap
And I bet I will after readin your weak ass rap
(OK closer)

Boy Wonder (unfuck yaself too, break ya shit down line by line)

yo dawg yo flows not tight enough/
especially when yo boys rappin tighter that hand cuffs/
(Aight opener, it works)

dawg play around and get yo shirt tagged up/
and have you fellin like what good is yo life if you cant feel nothing from the waist up/
(OK, lackin any kind of real punch though, mostly just filler)

nigga yo flow is weak thats a no brainer/
me being better than tag is like a bitch that doesnt give head thats a no brainer
(Weak closer)

Vote-TAG, his whole verse was just nice with good personals and punches with a little wordplay. Boy Wonder, break ya shit down like TAG did next time, i see confusing garbage like that again and the next time i go over ya momma's crib i'll tell her to keep ya locked up in the basement this time.
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