im gonna give this one to High Class

High Class
you kept nice wordplay, all he way through which was constant,
nice immagery, and nice drop.

Im in a world with situations, wars in many locations
But sooner or later, it will come back to me in rotation
^^^nice^^^

Now im facing Hell with his faces of perception
lethal injections of poisons, from how he shows his effection
^^^also nice^^^

Tribz
aiight
wordplay was a lil choppy, and i thought inconsistant, but i liked your drop, it has some very nice immagery in places.

Sometimes we forget what would happen if we were in others' shoes
And make a kid go through as much pain as their mothers' do
When those who struggle have the chance to live a normal life
Why do we decide that its not allowed and make that child grieve in strife
^^^if only all your poem was like this, consistantly^^^

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