|
\/ pissing me off!!!!
|
IP:
Nitro
talkin bout my shit being prewritten when yours was shit//
ill make u spit blood and teeth after this battle spit//
^^^i liked the second line 6/10
Your gunna need yourself, Spektaculsto see ur dick//
this kids got a shroda as a dick, its as thin as a toothpick//
^^^pretty wack considering the time you had 4/10^^^
must be a new thing for people.. 4 rhymes in one line//
im strangling u, cutting off your lifeline//
^^^first line was aiight 6/10
Spekta
I'm flippin' ya script before it's spit, ~ya ripped//
but unlike (Miss) 'Cleo', I'm tellin' ya 'fortune' ~ya sick// -but
^^^nice 6.5/10^^^
You can't be ill throwin' up on tha mic and ya might not like~//
How I'm pullin' ya covers,Nitro discovered lovers -some dude wit his wife at night//
^^^wack 4/10^^^
You like "sunsets, and long walks on the beach" -you say in ya bio//
No wonder you changed that shit, now you callin' yaself NITRO??//
^^^last line could of won it for you, but you need to come harder with ya closer 4.5/10^^^
Nitro 16/30- you need to elevate, i thought you would of come harder.
Spekta15/30- you need to take the ~'s outta ya lines and just keep elevatin.
__________________
<center><img src=http://www.rhymevantage.com/forum/attachment.php?s=&postid=6921=1 border=0></center>
|