opener:koncept
closer:koncept
punches:koncept
methphors:tie
enjoyability:mcprofit- all i can say is 'lol'
structure:koncept
overall:koncept

mcprofit keep elevatin dawg, ur verse was wack as hell go to the 'wackness emergency centre' and elevate. in fact you need an elevator.

koncept keep it up dagw.

aiight

please vote for the battle in my sig.

peace

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