aiight this is gon be a proper vote, y'all d/r motherfuckas.
give proper explanations.

Deser eagle
my "flows" are sicker than that shit "cummin" from
this niggas dick, when he "bedridden"//
^^^weak opener, aiight for a filler 5/10^^^

this nigga "empty-minded" like "hollow-tips" i
"rip" more "tide" tha ocean liners"//
i done "stole" more "souls"(soles) than fuckin
"shoe-shiners"//
^^^nice, 7/10^^^

i'm so "strong" i'm "wanted" more than
"moon-shiners"//
he's like a "german soldier" what part of "defeat"
can he "not-see"(nazi)//
^^^second line wack, 5/10^^^

his votes are "specials" like he worked at "RB's"(Arby's)
even if he had my "arm-he" still couldn't "beat-me"//
^^^not bad 6/10^^^

overall-23/40 57.5%

you had soem good concept, but ur lines were pretty short, but in a way it kinda suits your style.

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MDkilla20

I Thought I was Battling Opponents with Skilled-Scripts and I Heard You was
an"Ill-Kid"//
^^^after skilled scripts, fell off 5/10^^^

But the Deal-Is, You're Assuming the Role of a Great like ALI Portrayed by
"Will Smith"//
^^^lol, 7/10^^^

after this you got less signs of life than posters that praise
"abortion-bids"//
^^^lol, 7/10^^^

its not apparent you're ill, ya skill level has never raised like-
"orphan-kids"//
^^^could of bin a lil better 6/10^^^

fuck ya views on me I add-vantage points till you're
"damaged-n-broken"//
^^^probs ur worst punch 4/10^^^

fuckin failure, ya wouldn't be Suited for A's if you
were"Managing-Oakland"//
^^^you need an harder finisher 5/10^^^


overall-34/60 56.6%


winner-deser eagle

both y'all no hate, cud both you
plz vote for the battle in my sig
but urs dosent have to be as long as mine. lol.


aiight

peace

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