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heres your breakdown
Deser_Eagle
nigga, this is ya "first and last" battle. i'll have you "slipt" and "kicked off da site." this bitch prolly gon' "steal"
my verse and try to "flip-the-script"
^ No Flow nor Structure Weak Punches 5/10
dude prolly white, sayin "nigga" to try to be "hip." you like
an "obedient slave" you "whipped."
^ Funny, Enjoyed it .. alright vocab 7/10
Deser-75.00
Slipt
Ya soft like marshmallows fruity like gummies /
look at those lines is this Battlin for Dummies/
^ Horrible I mean 1/10 vocab and 1 alright punch.. had structure and flow though... 6/10
Not a racist comment just words my mouth shout /
take u out the picture wit some of my WHITE-OUT /
^ Worst Vocab.. captilizing the WHITE-OUT just makes it look worse.. 4/10
Slipt -45.00
Overall-Deser_Eagle
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