aiight
structure needs changin up a lot. lines everywere and most of an unequal length.
your vocab needs to be a little more expansive,
wordplay just seems to be like DIPSET just multies and more multies.
your lines need to make sense
Nigga, I can read you, you can't read me I'm in Hebrew, partner's don't even need you, damn I could'nt be you.

jus keep ya head up and keep elevatin

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