i really liked this, i can relate
we all go thrugh all that mind play on whether it's good or not, true or false
Quote:
I can't help it.. I think I'm fallin for you, i love everything you do,
Get ahold of yourself, "love" isnt something you wanna go through,
I've been hurt in the past, but I trust him, I dont think he'd hurt me,
Hurt.. yeah.. you been hurt a lot, that's not something you wanna be,
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i really liked that right there
this piece really took me back and made me think
i dont think any techincals are needed, i just think you
was more emotional and poetic with the thoughts of the two
in the begining... it kind of made the power of the piece fall off as you went on, but i still liked this piece
nice job hun
keep writin
keep elevatin