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Old 11-30-03, 11:34 PM   #27
EyE QuE
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Okay I can see bill is getting hated on, let me give you some advise, don't be such a wise ass untill you get a crew or sum boys to roll with. Verse wise, look at top battlers see y they're so respected and follow their actions. To be honest all your verses are funny but stupid no punchlines no meta's all you got is flow. Battles are differant then ryming. You gotta insult them with a new and creative way, maybe give some complexity in your verse. But for tha breakdown since i beat you both aguhny had bill in everything but flow and structure, bill....you need to work on your punches and then you'll have some wins
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