maven man... shit go easy on peeps... why 3... 2 is still good, not like he sleepin' on peeps./.. lol...

fo-real, u elevated ... nice flow, structure still need a bit of work, but that's a personal elevation thing not something that can really be advised on... the story stayed on topic some pretty clever wordplay, an' mad vocab 2... overall it was good.. not great, but what is.. stay up, stay elevating..1

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