This was about you finding God? I read through it a few times and that's the only thing I could imagine it being about. You wrote it in a different way. The slashes were kind of annoying but I guess if you wrote it by breaking the sentences up it wouldn't look right? I dunno.

Overall, I thought this was good. The way it rhymed and came together I liked. The topic and the way you wrote it was different. There's probably more to it than finding God that I missed. But I liked all that. Not bad at all, my man. Keep posting. Sorry for the dumb reply. I didn't really know what I was talking about