I'm really suprised no one responded to this yet. It's a really good writing. I liked the topic. Was this the person's first time trying drugs?

"I
Close my eyes to shield the inhuman proposal
My
Undecided fate lies at my disposal
Everything
Is on the balance
Tonight
Is filled with lying, drugs, and violence"

That right there made me think so. Or maybe the guy just has a big decision on his mind weighing him down that leads to him taking drugs?

The way it was structured gives me a lot of respect for you as a writer. You had it so that "I, My, Everything, Tonight" was in each stanza everyother line. It's hard to write and get all your stuff on paper clearly, for me at least. But to have a structure like that and say everything you want? Real nice.

I don't know what else to say except keep on writing and posting them up. You have a talent.