I liked this piece a lot man. .

The flow was good, for the most part. . The structure made it really easy for me to pick up on the flow from the beginning, keeping me reading on and on. .
I loved the topic. . I've seen it be done before, but you flipped the concept very nicely, making it a good read.
Lyrically, this piece was nice. . Liked the family tree line, and various others, but that was my favorite.

Overall, this was very good, I look forward to reading more by you. . stay up.