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Old 12-01-03, 03:14 PM   #8
Gunman tha Great
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aight this battle was weak and punchless but fuck it i already wasted 63 seconds reading it so i might as well vote

Flow- tha first kid-take that dumb ass white glow shit off so somebody can read ya name

punches-none

metaphors-none worth shit

structure-2nd kiddo

line that won the battle-that harvest line even though i doubt you intended for it to be a play on words
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