1ST VERSE FEEL SHORT ON THE BEGINING BUT CAUGHT UP HE NEEEDED TO BE MORE CONSTRUCTIVE IN HIS IDEAS AND DELIVERY...PLUS SOME PUNCHES WERE REAL SHORT ONLY HALF ASS THE SET UP LINES SEAMED BETTER.OVER ALL 6 /10

SECOND VERSE
VERY IMPRESSIVE INTRO AND VOCAB DELIVERY WAS CONCEISE AS WELL....SOME VOCAB MAKES IT A COMPLEX READ.....
ALSO THE PUNCHES THOUGH WELL WRITTEN IN WORDPLAY ALSO FELL A LITTLE SHORT IN THE DEPTH OF MEANING.....BUT CONTENT COVERED YOU WELL. 8/10

BOTHE TOGEATHER MAKES THIS 7/10