you idiot, this a complete bite of tupac. I know you gave him credit, but damn, you even picked a shitty verse of his.

As for the one verse you didn't take from pac, you need to work on original content. I don't give a flying fuck if you're a west side nigga, if you can't write a story or express an opinion through rap, you got nothing. Try to write about something that means something to you, not just about balling and all that asinine shit. Try to make your bars even, it helps with the flow.
And next time give better replies.
Shit.

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