Goin against tha grain

This was a close battle, high class.....ur's gotta betta towards tha end, work on bein more consistent.....rhyme scheme was off at first...very choppy, tribs....solid, didnt lyke tha end
good flows for newbies though

tribz- rhyme scheme: 7, flow: 7.5, Story: 8, total: 22.5

high class- rhyme scheme: 7, flow: 7, Story: 7.5, total: 21.5

high class - go more in depth next time, tell us how you messed up and what was tha chance you were given

i'm goin against tha grain

vote- Tribz, no hard feelins, good luck and may tha best man win, check my verse, stay real, peace, 1

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