sorry that its taken so long Sage...I liked it from the beginning..

Don’t look into my eyes

You’ll trip on my lashes
And fall into the intellectual lake

Your condensed mind
Will selfishly expand
To the shape of my body

Your paternal thoughts
Will overcome the truth
b/c you don’t understand

Saying that theres a lot mopre to you then the cover
except you explained it beautifully and simply as well


don’t make me scream

Shrills and cries of silence, I feel you
Rearranging me
Subconsciously, no longer equal or free

You chained me to the demons
Condemned me to the world

You have already been through a lot and you think it wouldnt
really take that much to tip your coffee over..thats life..very nice

these two stanzas stood out to me the most and
the others meant well but faded off somewhat...
definately a great write by any means..you even
made goody two shoes Calisto swear

ill probaly catch some flak for that there...great piece..peace