sorry that its taken so long Sage...I liked it from the beginning..
Don’t look into my eyes
You’ll trip on my lashes
And fall into the intellectual lake
Your condensed mind
Will selfishly expand
To the shape of my body
Your paternal thoughts
Will overcome the truth
b/c you don’t understand
Saying that theres a lot mopre to you then the cover
except you explained it beautifully and simply as well
don’t make me scream
Shrills and cries of silence, I feel you
Rearranging me
Subconsciously, no longer equal or free
You chained me to the demons
Condemned me to the world
You have already been through a lot and you think it wouldnt
really take that much to tip your coffee over..thats life..very nice
these two stanzas stood out to me the most and
the others meant well but faded off somewhat...
definately a great write by any means..you even
made goody two shoes Calisto swear
ill probaly catch some flak for that there...great piece..peace