both were good real good

i injoyed both

Ape
yours was deep it felt like you tried to get a picture of everyline which i find incredable and and you also discribed a great fight
scence


By APE

Killer starts to attack as he takes advantage as my flashback/
I fight back as my hand slaps at his jaw, makin' his neck snap/
Over 200 pounds bounce off the ground with a vicious sound/



Diverse

Great lines strong picture fram i saw wat you wanted the reader to picture


Diverse line
yellow tape surrounds my house as i gaze upon my daughters face and bloodstained blouse//
gasping for air i cover my mouth, as the tears begin to form and gently poor out//

Diverse line
as i take my blade inside his rib cage and filet him//
slit his throat slowly...watch the blood spill//
this was sick nice scenery


and i also injoyed your closeing


only one of a thousands ways i would make him pay//
but i've only got ten lines so that's all i could say...


overall vote goes to diverse


Peace to both