I liked Ape's structure better than Diverse's. I think that it conveyed the passage of time better first of all, and second of all as everyone else noted actaully had a strong ended.

Repay the vote if you don't mind man, i have a few sleeping battles.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=95069

and also

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95433

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