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Old 12-02-03, 01:52 AM   #9
Verse112
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on point till the end the end just wasn't climatic enough for the body of the shit.. also the structure is mad fucked and you some lines unrhymed try to rhyme your transitions to ... it take practice but you got skill overall......7/10 that a C bra
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