Nice battle...

Thrust:Your verse showed potential, the flow was solid
Nice use of vocab, story wise...it wasnt that good, no real story
to follow more a verse of thought, taking on the agressive
approach to the verse i felt your verse lacked creativity (althougth) i saw some creative elemnts, and showed a lack of concept ideology.

Ill mental: Nice little verse...i liked the concept,
and the wordplay...a solid flow, and good structure
There was no dofference in quality in the verse...apart from
Ill showed more creativity and produced some v.good imagery
Therefore i vote

V. Ill mental